Peer Edit of Jack S

1. Give more detail on personal experiences with job lossses. And how things have changed at Fleet Farm.

2. The other sources that could be used might be other managers at local retail stores.

3. There is a good scene but maybe add more info about work before the economy started to change.

4. Go more into depth on personal experiences with job losses and teenagers being let go. How it affected the work and how work changed. Talk more about what work at fleet farm is like. And compare businesses.